It's somewhat like you removed options from the original, then didn't actually add anything back in to replace them. There is tons to draw from, and yet very little actually in offer. Where is the alchemy ingredients? The Beast souls? The fighting arenas, ancient ruins, cultivation techniques, book pages, law pools, artifact puppets, beast prison, floating islands, etc etc. Only six items? Most of which are rather generic? You could get more than that from just reading the first 20 chapters or so, and most of them would match come to think of it. The item section is just incredibly bare. The post jump effect itself could easily have been an entire perk in itself, helping teach people and bring out their potential. Invincible Swordsman is weird in that the post jump effect feels almost completely unrelated to the in-jump effect. Soul Protection feels like it should in some way reference the Vine Nie Li had, and honestly should be more expensive given how strong an affect it has. It's also rather odd that one is a capstone and one isn't given, as the perk itself says, they are in effect the same perk but for different subjects.
You either know nothing or are a grandmaster. Stuff like the Alchemy Grandmaster/Inscriptionist feels somewhat lackluster as a capstone, not to mention there isn't really a scale. The added on last sentence feels like it should be the main effect, rather than something added as an aside or afterthought. It reads like its the ability to change canon, which is something you would expect as a matter of course. The 'Destiny/Fate' capstone I'm not even really sure what effect it would have. Merely 'given time' which, in Xianxia verse, could mean just about anything. Deciphering Languages doesn't really give an idea of time frame. Especially with the added top that it guarantees anyone you teach will be able to understand and use some of it. The Law Comprehension Perk is rather cheap given the Law is a rather major thing for the lower levels this jump seems to focus on. It feels like that should be an extra 100CP or something. On to the perks: The bloodline one feels like it shouldn't default to 'has no drawbacks or weaknesses', since that goes against what is explicitly canon. Meanwhile Fighter *has* to be red, so if you wanted to pick that for the perks or anything, tough luck. And I'm not even sure *why* drop in has to pay double for any of them, other than 'because'. Like the fact that the discounts vary between the origins, vary which can discount between origins, but while none decrease the cost of the top two, drop in has to pay double for those two. The whole soul colour/origin thing feels needlessly convoluted and railroading. Like, if you remove the page breaks and reduce the text to normal 11, the jump is only about 7 pages long, and has notably fewer options than the original. Still can't help but think its incomplete and hastily made.Īre you planning on adding any more to this? Because currently it feels rather empty. Other than that its good compared to the previous Jump. So far that's all the problems I can see. Items - No Cultivation Techniques that would is standard for Cultivation Jumps. It should include explanation about refining herbs and crafting elixers and potions to enhance cultivations or cure poisons. It should include explanation about Enchanting Items, Crafting Scrolls and Building Arrays.Īlchemy Grandmaster - Same problem with Grandmaster Inscriptionist too underwhelming discerption. Grandmaster Inscriptionist - Too underwhelming ability and it doesn't even explain what it does. Law Comprehension - Only immunity? no bonus learning speed at mastering techniques and skills related to the Law? Soul Realm Cultivation - Your starting Cultivation and why does it not have the ability to bestow this Cultivation System to others Post-Jump? that should be standard. Like the Red Realm only have x1 Cultivation Speed and Indigo Realm have x7 Cultivation Speed or 圆4 Cultivation Speed. It should be revamp that it give Cultivation Speed bonus. Soul Realm Colors - Your paying CP but it doesn't do anything other than giving fluff that your a talentless or genius. While its nice its been revamped but their are still some problems.
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